[There was, however, a very clear worry that the corruption would grow if she pushed herself too far, and if this wasn't her beast form, that was a very dangerous prospect given that she was fashioning a pocket reality.]
Have you considered that perhaps multiple efforts might help to shore up the defense, so that nobody exhausts themselves?
[Going for phrasing it tactically rather than suggesting that she might be overtaxing herself.]
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[There was, however, a very clear worry that the corruption would grow if she pushed herself too far, and if this wasn't her beast form, that was a very dangerous prospect given that she was fashioning a pocket reality.]
Have you considered that perhaps multiple efforts might help to shore up the defense, so that nobody exhausts themselves?
[Going for phrasing it tactically rather than suggesting that she might be overtaxing herself.]