Suggestive— [Oh, Viktor is dead set on this being a brothel, huh. The fanciest brothel in the land, not that Palamedes has been to any for a point of reference, but - sure. You know, he's just going to let that assumption exist, he doesn't know what might go on in the backrooms there. So,] I wonder how much of this place used to be something else.
[Enough, possibly? Perhaps he'll add a historical study of Trench to his list of fun, non-work projects to do, why not. That's Sixth enough. Maybe if God gets over himself, he'll tell Palamedes something about the First for comparison, but probably not.]
The bloodstone heist could be revisited. Or the principal drama could be the aftermath — there are options.
[Non-stop heist action would be tiring, after all. Perhaps the romance sections can be calmer. Maybe with a little intrigue.]
no subject
[Enough, possibly? Perhaps he'll add a historical study of Trench to his list of fun, non-work projects to do, why not. That's Sixth enough. Maybe if God gets over himself, he'll tell Palamedes something about the First for comparison, but probably not.]
The bloodstone heist could be revisited. Or the principal drama could be the aftermath — there are options.
[Non-stop heist action would be tiring, after all. Perhaps the romance sections can be calmer. Maybe with a little intrigue.]
What would you suggest, then? For a heist.