[yeah, it is pretty difficult to make gentle arm caresses not pda as hell, even if multiple eyeballs are involved. let viktor finish that tequila and it might get worse anyway.]
I assumed you were either exhausting your options or being- what is it, tongue in cheek? [he hoped the sixth wasn't so bad that he thought that was hot. thot corp would be in real trouble that way, the hottest of the hot or not.]
Rotund is at least a little better, though still... eh, questionable. I did not realize that this was the writing process, or how important descriptions of this particular aspect of the characters mattered. Truly a fascinating craft. [a little dry but like. he is kind of fascinated by the process so maybe not super dry.]
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I assumed you were either exhausting your options or being- what is it, tongue in cheek? [he hoped the sixth wasn't so bad that he thought that was hot. thot corp would be in real trouble that way, the hottest of the hot or not.]
Rotund is at least a little better, though still... eh, questionable. I did not realize that this was the writing process, or how important descriptions of this particular aspect of the characters mattered. Truly a fascinating craft. [a little dry but like. he is kind of fascinated by the process so maybe not super dry.]